Добавлено: Чт Июн 18, 2015 15:24
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On a proper install, the line above v1.05.1 should read:
"New Horizons mod v. 15.0427.f01 - English translation v. 2.48"
Sat,
A) I would shorten the version string by removing the "v. " parts, thus
New Horizons mod 15.0427.f01 - English translation 2.48
What do you think?
B) var/unit_upg.var
Unit upgrade #230 is translated to "Become Archer"
but the unit becomes unit #4 (Bowman) not Archer (unit #242)
C) text/message.txt
15. Unit award
#This unit can be awarded for outstanding performance in combat.#
=> suggest changing to
#This unit may be rewarded for outstanding performance in combat.#
or
#This unit deserves a medal for outstanding performance in combat.#
[EDIT 27/06/2015 13:15]
D) Text for Sun bracelet dialog (suggestion)
http://eador.com/B2/viewtopic.php?p=246157#246157
E) Stray '#' in dialog.var
http://eador.com/B2/viewtopic.php?p=246159#246159
F) Stray '#' in campaign_dialog.var
http://eador.com/B2/viewtopic.php?p=246160#246160
G) Text for Alkari encounter (suggestion)
http://eador.com/B2/viewtopic.php?p=246162#246162
H) Lizardman-Spellcaster discussion (below)
I) double pasting of text
http://eador.com/B2/viewtopic.php?p=246639#246639
[EDIT 27/06/2015 13:30]
J) Awkward generated text
var/dialog.var:11072:Text: #While exploring the province of %s, the hero %s has met a traveling %s of rarities.#
With "Curiosities Trader", it prints:
the hero X has met a traveling Curiosities Trader of rarities.
K) upgrade.txt
/630 Shield Wall
#The unit has the special ability to increase its defense and ranged defense by 3~ until the next turn, at the expense of halving its attack value and skipping this turn's action. When activated the unit gets Vigilance.#
Two problems: line too long (truncated) and "by 3" not "by 3~)
Suggested fix:
#The unit can increase its defense and ranged defense by 3 until the next turn, at the expense of halving its attack value and skipping this turn's action. When enabled, the unit gets Vigilance.#
Regards.
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